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GothyAly

GothyAly

By GothyAly

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Aly#4632
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when someone doesn't respect the rolplay talking about real life?
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: powergame is when someone abuses about bugs or glitches
    Status: Denied

hello.... do you talk to each stranger you meet?  by the way the reason i'm here is not that much interesting, i mean, i guess i'm just another traveler who's looking for treasures and adventures, i'm also looking to find some works or help people, you know, it would help me quite a lot, it makes me feel better.... you know, sometimes i feel like the same curiosity as Velululai, so i think i don't really know what i am looking for exaclty, i'm just pushed by curiosity in this moment, i mean, anything can happen... and i will be there when it will happen

Character Name: GothyAly
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: long black hair and eyes,tall 5,25 ft,very thin,weight 55kg, white skin, wears black fingerless gloves, black leather pants and black leather jacket
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Your application has been put on Denied as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography states that your character was born on a forest near Anthos, which doesn't make sense because Anthos was a continent, not a city. Also, it states that your character was born in 1523, but is 22. Your character would have been born on Arcas if she is only 22.
  • Your Skin does not correlate with your character's race- you are WAY too light for a wood elf- who are actively not white. please fix this. 
  • Your Character's name is the same as your username? did you intend this?
  • Your Role-play response is in first person, it needs to be in third person. Also, it needs to have quotations and emotes, such as: Bob went up towards the man. "Hello," he said with a smile.
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • You did not put a response at all to the question of what is roleplay.
  • Your whole character is unrealistically edgy. Please try to shape her to be more of a real person.

 

 

 

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @latte#1608

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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