gpc20

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Your definitions need some work and are lacking the level of depth we require. I recommend besides fixing them also using examples as they show you understand the concepts. The following links can prove useful while performing this task
  • Metagaming
  • Powergaming
• I would like to ask you to use at least one more lore in your biography (Make sure you use lore that shows knowledge of your race not only locations or name of cities) The following links can prove useful with this task. Make your biography at least seven complete sentences long. 
  • Dwarf Information
  • Mountain Dwarf
  • Dwarf Language
  • Dwarf History

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

• In this case, your application was denied due to the fact you posted a new one. I will close this one and review your new one.
  • Your new application can be found in the following link: New App

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.