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gpc20

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: someone starting with something they are not supposed to have?
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Ruining role-play kind of.
    Status: Denied

When Thirrean first was born his mother died from the birth so his father took care of him until he was 8 when his father past away... his father was kind of abusive, and died when orenians sacked his home, when he lost his eye. Thirrean then moved in with his aunt who was widowed. She was very kind and nurturing to the 8 year old, until she fell ill and passed. By this time though Thirrean was now 17 so he was able to care for himself. 2 years later when he is 19 he moves from northern atlas way down south because of intense orenian influence around his village...... when he was 26 he traveled around to a few towns in search of his purpose in life, so he found his calling here as a warrior, really just a personal warrior in his heart, he urns for adventure and wants to give, having friends a go again so he can adventure with others. and following his dwarf morals of the brathmordakin.

Character Name: Thirrean Leadfoot
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: Thirrean is a somewhat redhead, lost one of his eyes so he wears an eyepatch, kind of scronny.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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SoulReapingWolf

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

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For the following reasons,

  • Your definitions need some work and are lacking the level of depth we require. I recommend besides fixing them also using examples as they show you understand the concepts. The following links can prove useful while performing this task
  • I would like to ask you to use at least one more lore in your biography (Make sure you use lore that shows knowledge of your race not only locations or name of cities) The following links can prove useful with this task. Make your biography at least seven complete sentences long. 

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

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SoulReapingWolf

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

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But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

  • In this case, your application was denied due to the fact you posted a new one. I will close this one and review your new one.
    • Your new application can be found in the following link: New App

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.

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