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GREATPUG
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: GREATPUG#3493
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I would ping an admin or someone on the staff team(only once) describe what happened and then let them handle it.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It makes it so something that is supposed to be a secret or known by not everyone is leaked and everyone knows about it.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

I begin to sit down on the cushion when I notice the third person in the room. They had a slender body with curly orange hair and a face full of freckles hidden behind the thick round glasses they had. They were wearing a dark green button up shirt a pair of blue jeans, and a set of sneakers. A human. "Don't mind them" the old lady said. "They are just my butler."

I looked back at her and began to tell my story. "It was a normal day at the mountain, not'ing different, I was just minding my business w'en all of a sudden I 'ad a vision of my w'ole family dead on the ground, drowned in a pool of t'ere own blood." "So you are here for my assistance?" The old lady asked. "Yes I fear t'at if I do not'ing it mig't come true." I said, body slightly trembling at the thought. "My assistance extracts a heavy price." She said. "I am willing to do anyt'ing to guaranty t'e safety of my family." I said in a tone that was sad with a bit of begging. "Fine." She said.

I sprout up and immediately say "T'ank you"

 

(' in the place of H)


Character Name: Orik
Character Race: Mountain Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 98
Physical Description: brown hair, blue eyes, 4'10'', big arms and legs with broad shoulders, big hands, big beard, 225lbs, chestplates, boots, pants/robes, belts
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too vague. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person. This means typing "He / him / his", "She / her / hers" or "They / them / theirs".

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

 

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too vague. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- When talking about your character’s actions, remember to use 3rd person. This means typing "He / him / his", "She / her / hers" or "They / them / theirs".

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

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