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    Referral: minecraftforum.net
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: by putting myself in the game and thinking realistically plus whats the point of rpgs if your not going to follow along
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: its like if someone told you whats gonna happen in your life for the next year that just makes everything boring and dull.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Averax
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Just above six foot with long flowing blonde hair and light sparkling blue eyes. lean in build but still solid. wearing tattered hunters garb
Roleplay Scenario:

I was out on a hunt as usual when I saw a creature I didn't recognize.  As I began to get closer I accidentally startled the creature and it ran off.  I followed the creature from the trees jumping from branch to branch slowly catching the creature. While following the creature it turned around and looked at me then sped up as if it could tell I was following it.  I started getting worried as I was straying too far off the path soon I wouldn't be able to find my way back without someone coming to get me.  I raced through the trees as fast as I could trying to catch the creature, but right as I got within striking distance I slipped on a branch and fell out of the trees and knocked myself out.  When I woke up I was laying down in a place far from where I chased the creature.  As I came to I became aware of the fact that I was tied up on the edge of camp.  The only person in sight was crouched over a fire cooking, When they noticed I was awake they turned and said, "Look who's awake our friend",  I found this very odd as they were alone.  Terrified I mustered a response, "What is happening", they hastily replied, "I am cooking dinner and then we are gonna play a game". I couldn't tell anything about the person as they were wearing a cloth over their face, and a robe covering their body and were crouched over onto a cane.  Because I was tied around a tree I managed to loosen the ropes and use them to climb up to the first branch, Reaching the branch I slipped out of the tie around the tree and ran down the branch.  At the end I jumped off landing on the back of the person immediately sinking in a rear naked choke.  The person struggled hard but was caught off guard and couldn't manage to get me off slowly sinking into the dark abyss.  Uncovering the person's face I revealed it was one of my own a wood elf, starving, and stunned I wandered off beginning my adventure home and somehow eventually ending up here. 

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ Please make your story more responding to the old hag. if you need more help understanding please feel free to contact me on discord @blake0205

→ Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person.

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @blake0205 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is blake0205 If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @blake0205

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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