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Niamh

By Niamh

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Gryphony#0417
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is not acting on the characters Knowledge but your own.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is instantly having things or ignoring Magical effects etc.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

My character would be flattered because she was welcomed so nicely . Her response would be ,,Nice to meet you! I'm searching for a new place to settle down.My name is Niamh ,may I know yours?''

 

Character Name: Niamh
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Her skin is very pale and her lips are red.She has dark brown hair,2 horns,2 black wings, green eyes, slim figure,180cm of hight,65kg.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!

    https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that Niamh is the daughter of the elf queen, has black wings and goat like horns. All those things are against our application policy and must be removed.
  • Your Character Biography references a hot air balloon. Hot air balloons are lore breaking.
  • Your Character Biography states that orcs raided and killed your character's close friends. That is a character trope and must be removed from your character's biography.
  • Your Physical Description does not match your character's lore!

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ JokerLow#6666]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message JokerLow to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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