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  • Rules: Yes
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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Don’t control other players' actions or outcomes - Instead, allow responses
    Play within your character’s strengths and weaknesses.
    Accept failure when it makes sense
    Your character shouldn't be good at everything
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Metagaming disrupts fair roleplay by breaking the immersion and integrity of the game, often resulting in a less enjoyable experience for everyone involved.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Elara
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Height-1.80:Weight-60kg:Hair-white and blue:Eye-dark blue:Outfit-gray huntress outfit
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

My name is Elara, daughter of the High Elven noble house of Velmorae, known for our deep connection to the ancient magics of the stars. My people, once proud and mighty, now find themselves scattered across the realms, their lands long lost to the encroaching shadows of time. My house was known for its devotion to balance and the pursuit of knowledge, and for centuries we served as guardians of sacred relics—artefacts capable of altering the very fabric of magic itself.

But like many stories of old, mine begins with a fall from grace. Years ago, a betrayal shattered the harmony of my house. I was just a child when my father, the head of the Velmorae family, was consumed by ambition. His pursuit of an ancient relic, an artifact of forbidden power, led to the destruction of our home and the ruin of everything I once knew. With my father’s fall came my exile, stripped of title, lands, and family.

Since that fateful day, I’ve wandered the edges of the world, seeking the wisdom that might one day restore the honor of my house and undo the damage done. The way has not been easy. The world outside the golden spires of our homeland is a cruel and uncaring place.

I’ve spent years searching for the artifact my father sought, for it is said to possess the power to mend what was broken or plunge the world into eternal darkness. My quest has taken me to places both wondrous and horrifying, but always, I feel I am being followed. Sometimes by the whisper of my ancestors, other times by darker forces, ones that hunger for the same power I seek.

And now, it has brought me here, to this stinking, forgotten town, where the air is thick with decay. The swamp reeks of rot, and yet... it feels familiar, as if something ancient and long buried is calling me here.

So, when I heard rumors of an old hag who might hold the keys to secrets buried deep within the swamp, I made my way here—hoping she might offer me a glimpse of the answers I’ve been searching for, or perhaps a warning.

The hag’s eyes meet mine, and in them, I see something… not pity, but recognition. She knows my blood, my name, and my purpose. And in this strange, dim-lit tent, surrounded by the whispers of forgotten magic, I feel both dread and relief. Whatever it is she has to offer, I know that it will shape the rest of my journey.

“I’ve come seeking answers,” I say, lowering myself into the cushion, my gaze never leaving hers. “I seek the relic my father failed to find... and the truth of my house. If you know anything, I am willing to pay the price.”

I can only hope that the cost is not too great.

 

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

→ Your Character’s Story is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

→ https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord  wretchedaidan  to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

→  https://discord.gg/lotc

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

→ Hey there! A section of your application has been flagged for use of AI. Please don't use AI when doing your application, the roleplay responses purpose is to help us Staff Members determine if you know the basics of roleplaying, we don't ask for a masterpiece, but simply wish to see that you know the basics. Feel free to apply again after twenty-four hours!


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord wretchedaidan. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/lotc

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