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By Nico_the_angel

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: knowing something is happening in game and when off joining to do something
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: a move that could be done by a god
    Status: Denied

I look at this man with terror in my eyes "he looks like dad" I think. I wonder why someone would be so nice to me, a freak. "I-I wanted to g-get away from my parents" I stutter out. as I try to walk away the man grabs my arm I pull it back terrified and run off. Why did i do that is he going to find me? No ill be fine

Character Name: Zyro
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: black and pink hair looks as if out of a 1980 school film as the "depressed" kid has gapped teeth and wheres headphones always
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions need a little bit of work and you need to use examples. I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

 https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 


 

  • Your Character Biography did not have enough lore references. Please include at least 2 lore references and please don’t mention killing a dragon. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are? (ECT)

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Physical Description is not appropriate for the time period in which LotC takes place; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

 

  • Your Skin  is not up to LotC standards as well as it does not match your physical description. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/lotc-skinarchive/home

(you may also edit them so that they fit your description better)

 

 

  • Your Character Like is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's like connects with your biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next app)

 

  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!

(Please be sure to give reasoning/examples in your next App)


  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors  in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly.

https://app.grammarly.com/
 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need any help? Feel free to contact me via the LOTC forums or my discord [Oh_Ontario#4000]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Oh_Ontario to find me in-game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LOTC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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