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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-server-list.com
    Discord: hayboi7#1317
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: An example of breaking character due to information gained by the player rather than the character they are playing. The character couldn't have this information but can act upon it anyway due to outside information
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Trying to win without actually realistically role playing
    Status: Denied

I am here to make my name known, I will build an empire of trade and connect myself with anyone who wants a connected world like myself. 

Character Name: Faendal
Character Race: Wood Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 6'0, 80kg, ragged clothing, blonde curtains to top of ear, olive toned, silver eyes
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sarahbarah

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Physical Description does not match your character’s race. Wood elves cannot have silver eyes.

  • Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly! (Eye colors do not match)

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

  • Since death is a very common fear among individuals, I recommend editing this part of your Character Fear Response. Your Character's Fear should be somewhat unique to them and tie into their personality traits/quirks.

  • Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

 

A small side-note: Wood elves are typically darker in complexion! This is not required, but if you would like to find a skin more suited for a wood elf, you can look in the skin archive here: 

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done, or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message sarahbarah. If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at sarahbarah#0007

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

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sarahbarah

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

 

Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above  ♥


 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [sarahbarah#0007]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message sarahbarah to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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