HaZe_Jezzelon

Hey there, your application is almost there, for the time being, it has been placed on,

For the following reasons,

• Your definitions on Metagaming & Powergaming are fine however I suggest touching them up a bit. Make sure you understand these concepts fully.
• Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • Dark Elf Wiki
  • Vira’ker
  • Vira’ker Settlement
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed?
• Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
  • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
  • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
  • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

Make sure you make these corrections on the following 24 hours

If you need any help you can contact me through my discord WolfKnux (IdleSoul) #1674 you can also join our New Player Discord – Where you can ask questions to our Application team, and meet other server players.

I also suggest looking for skins in our Skin Archive

nah im fine thanks 

Your skin doesn’t fit that of a dark elf in our lore, please take my suggestion.

Just now, SoulReapingWolf said:

Your skin doesn’t fit that of a dark elf in our lore, please take my suggestion.

ok let me check them and what do i need to change to fit my skin

• Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • Dark Elf Wiki
  • Vira’ker
  • Vira’ker Settlement
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed?
• Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
  • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
  • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
  • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

7 hours ago, SoulReapingWolf said:

• Your Biography a bit short I’d suggest making it a bit longer, with at least a couple more complete sentences (7) and including at least two more lore mentions. The following links can help you with the latter. This is a space for you to write the origin/history of your character.
  • Dark Elf Wiki
  • Vira’ker
  • Vira’ker Settlement
  • Creatures
  • Flora
  • Arcas
• I suggest expanding your description a bit, how do his features look like? How is he usually dressed?
• Your interesting facts should be complete sentences and follow the following format
  • Positive (strength, skill, achievement)
  • neutral (likes, dislikes hobbies)
  • negative (Fears, flaws, weakness)

wait let me edit my facts

okay check it now 

22 minutes ago, HaZe_PvP said:

wait let me edit my facts

okay check it now 

so am i good??

Applicant has been contacted with further instructions. 
Time Extended +12 Hours

I am sorry to be the one to tell you this but your application was unfortunately

But don’t give up just yet, you can make another immediately!

You’ve reached your time limit.

Make sure you add the corrections I said on my previous comment before you post another application.

If you have any doubts, please don’t hesitate to contact me through a message in the forums or via the New Player Discord.