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Hisshicz
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Hisshicz#3191
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using information from irl in RP when Character doesnt even know about this information
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: breaking RP for other people for own good like cutting someone's leg off in my slice of a sword
    Status: Denied

My name is Mordan, i am a Dark elf Born in a city name Magaralin, city That was built by our ancestors in Era Of The Magaralin. My parents were amazing peoples, my father Elacan was a Hunter and my mother Inagella was saleswoman she was working at a weapon shop. after i was 20 y.o. my father started teaching me how to shoot from a bow and a swordmanship, after 42 years i mastered swordman ship and shooting from bow and then i did go to world. After few years when i traveled trough the world meeting new peoples and friends, i getted to know that my parents were killed by the Old God Poison. So i did go back to Magaralin and i got to know that we were in war. i wanted revenge so i joined and i became a soldier. After the war i was sad and angry but after long 30 years i was again at someways fine, i didnt forget what happend, but i learned how to live with it. Now i am going trough the World trying to stay alive.

 


Character Name: Mordan
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 125
Physical Description: Height 6,5 feets, Weight 168 lbs, white hairs, red eyes, muscular body-build, has white shirt, blue hoodie, black jeans, leather boots and gloves
Roleplay Scenario:

Mordan looked in the gentleman’s eyes *shakes his hand* and start talking. ”Good day, sir. I am here in this amazing city to start a new life. You see, my family is dead, so I decided to travel through the world and find some peaceful place to live an amazing life. But it seems that I have somewhere to be in a moment, so I prey you a good day Sir, and goodbye.” Then Mordan goes deep inside the city.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to it having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include a minimum of one dialogue sentence and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above errors, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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