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Hisshicz

Hisshicz

By Hisshicz

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: Hisshicz#3191
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using information from irl in RP when Character doesnt even know about this information
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: breaking RP for other people for own good like cutting someone's leg off in my slice of a sword
    Status: Denied

Mordan looked in the gentleman’s eyes *shakes his hand* and start talking. ”Good day, sir. I am here in this amazing city to start a new life. You see, my family is dead, so I decided to travel through the world and find some peaceful place to live an amazing life. But it seems that I have somewhere to be in a moment, so I prey you a good day Sir, and goodbye.” Then Mordan goes deep inside the city.

Character Name: Mordan
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 125
Physical Description: Height 6,5 feets, Weight 168 lbs, white hairs, red eyes, muscular body-build, has white shirt, blue hoodie, black jeans, leather boots and gloves
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Amelica

 

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to it having too many errors, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include a minimum of one dialogue sentence and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

After correcting the above errors, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @amelica#8025, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

 

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