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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: PC Gamer
    Discord: noob_taskforcemain
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it makes the game less fun for others and makes it so it ruins the experience of said sever
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: it should be avoided because of the fact THAT IT RUINS THE EXPERIANCE FOR OTHERS AND MAKES IT SEEM UNREALISTIC sorry for the cap lock
    Status: Denied

Was orphaned by his father and then raised by Noble Uraeus. Marcus was trained at the age of 6 to his year 18. he was very smart for his age and learned many things like how to read and write. He ran many businesses in the towns he visited. Uraeus was killed by a rival noble for power just as Marcus turned 18 now seeking revenge for his father.  Oh yeah he grew up at the town on the coordinates x: 1378 and y: -375


Character Name: Marcus Augustus IV
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: 5'10 male man with an average build and wears chainmail armor
Roleplay Scenario:

The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"I hope to find the man who slaughtered my father."  As He looks around and notices, this is the wrong town and he was supposed to make a right not a left. So, he turns around and walks the other way not wanting to continue the conversation.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! Your application has been put on pending as there are changes that need to be made before you can be accepted. See below. 

 

  • Powergaming/Metagaming
    • please give an example of powergaming and metagaming so I know you know what it means
  • Background story
    • the town's name is Alba
    • we do not allow application characters to be noble. You could say you were raised by a merchant who was rising in power and was up for nobility. You should probably keep him unnamed as he is a made up character, and those who roleplay in Alba will obviously not know him.
  • Roleplay Sample
    • Simply add a little more. give a little more emotion in your dialogue.
  • Character Name
    • General server culture has led to only Kings and Emperors using roman numerals in their names, please remove the IV as you are not a king nor emperor





 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours,  you will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @tarajess to let me know, or if you don’t have Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has been denied. Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired. However, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

  • Powergaming/Metagaming
    • please give an example of powergaming and metagaming so I know you know what it means
  • Background story
    • the town's name is Alba
    • we do not allow application characters to be noble. You could say you were raised by a merchant who was rising in power and was up for nobility. You should probably keep him unnamed as he is a made up character, and those who roleplay in Alba will obviously not know him.
  • Roleplay Sample
    • Simply add a little more. give a little more emotion in your dialogue.
  • Character Name
    • General server culture has led to only Kings and Emperors using roman numerals in their names, please remove the IV as you are not a king nor emperor

 

My discord is @tarajess if you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. You can also ask in the LOTC Discord for help.

 

You can join the LOTC discord here: Discord

If you still need help, check the wiki! WIKI

Link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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