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akira shyrm

By akira shyrm

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: levilama#1968
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: is using info that you didnt recieve through the roleplay and use it like it was
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: ruining the roleplay by going out of youre role to play as if youre the best
    Status: Denied

i whispered adventure the man said well you can check out that weapon shop cause youre gonna need it (thinking) what a drag now i need to check it out otherwise its rude the man said it isent rude if you dont wanna go? i talked outloud again thats so embarassing i just wwalked into the shop without looking back mmm i looked around i saw one blade with a red glanse to it it was creeping me out it was like it was alive well im gonna train tommorow better find a place to sleep

Character Name: akira
Character Race: Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: light brown hair red eyes black hoodie around 1.9m-2m weight is 41kg likes food and training dislikes humans and dark elfs
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WestCarolina

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences and proper grammar. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…
  • Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Character Biography refers to 'magic'. Please refrain from including it in your biography!
  • Your Character Biography includes 'Aegrothond' which is no longer a nation. Please refer to the wiki for current settlements and nations.

    To answer your question regarding personality - this can be portrayed or shown through how you emote your character! How they act, speak, etc.
     
  • Your Physical Description states your dislikes. Please remove them.
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me! Carol#7747 or on the forums. 

 

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WestCarolina

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 

  • You did not make the necessary changes in time 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Carol#7747 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message WestCarolina to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

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