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IllusionXY (Totosa)

By IllusionXY (Totosa)

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: AppreciateMusicWeebs#6292
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: using your knowledge as the controller of your role playing character to carry out unrealistic events in the server.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Using your role playing character as a means to have an unfair advantage, or to make unrealistic actions that would either make the field unbalanced or push down other player's fun.
    Status: Denied

“Hello, do you happen to know any jobs here that pay nicely? I’m in need of money right now and could use a place to stay. I don’t even know if I can earn enough to stay one night... I  have also come here in search of a place to learn more about arcane magic, have you heard of a place of the sort? Like I said first I am desperately in need of money if you could spare any change that would be nice!”

Character Name: Totosa
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 26
Physical Description: Totosa wears dark clothes, has light grey hair, sky blue eyes, is around 5 foot 11, and weighs only 132lbs (Robes on the skin came from the Biography)
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time because you made too many errors. Here are the changes that would need to be made on your next application: 

 

  • Your Character Biography states that he was “unlucky to not be born with magic”. This is not valid lore on the server as everyone must learn magic at some point. Please alter this.

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! The following links should all take you to a wiki page. I checked myself and fixed some of them.

  • Your Physical Description is not consistent with your skin. Please make the two match

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to be purely personality! Don’t include anything physical in there. 

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @Alicia#9441, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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