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Tom2409

By Tom2409

    • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: ILoveBitterballs#3544
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: a that player uses real-life knowledge about the state of the game to determine his character's actions, when that character lacks relevant knowledge or awareness under the given circumstances.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It is a game style one of those styles is roleplaying. and the end purpose is to maximilise your purposes in the roleplay game.
    Status: Denied

Tom Bitter is born in Acrass by the nation Llyria. His parents were unknown the Dark elf His family died 1 year after his birth by a virus.

The lonely Dark elf was raised by some farmers near westfleet.

In the years the Dark elf learned how to produce food from his new foster parents.

When the dark elf became a teenager his love to fighting become stronger, He trained day and night to become a powerful Dark elf

After a long time training and farming his foster parents died by age. This broke the dark elf his hearth. He sold the farm and became an adventurer that search a place to live and be loved.

The dark elf has made lots of friends in the years of traveling but never found his final destiny to live. The lots of traveling also cost a lot of money that he could pay from the money he did get from the farm of his foster parents but after a long life that money is also gone. Now the dark elf earns his food with being a mercenary with no preferences for kingdoms of clans.

Character Name: Tom Bitter
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 146
Physical Description: Dark elf,
Purple eyes red cape
Long white hair
grey cloths
Black boots
Thin
1,86 meter
Roleplay Scenario:

Tom Bitter answered with gentle but sneaky way ''Money but maybe more  that brings me to this town my friend''. 

 

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Your application has unfortunately been DENIED at this time due to reasons listed below. Please read through them, and make the appropriate changes before applying again.

 

IMPORTANT: The Minecraft username you have used to apply for our server is inappropriate. Please change it before you consider reapplying.

 

Definitions: Your definition for powergaming is incorrect - please fix this, and elaborate on it by providing an example as to what powergaming would look like. Make sure your example is appropriate, and something that may be commonly encountered.

 

Backstory: Your character's backstory isn't bad, but it can use some work. Please elaborate more on how losing both his birth parents, and foster parents affected him - additionally, why did he choose to be a warrior of all things? Please also take the time to format your work, and check for grammatical/spelling errors.

 

Character Age: Beginning characters, specifically when they are an elf can only be 18-100 when they first set foot into Almaris. You cannot be 146 unfortunately, please change this.

 

Physical Description: Good amount of detail, but please structure that information into a paragraph. An example is shown below:

 

Siegfried von Konisberg towers at a height of 6'3" - the man donned a powerful and robust build, yet he seemed to move impressively fast for his size. He had a pair of sharp, piercing blue eyes and his head was bald, yet riddled with scars which shined some light on his past as a warrior!

 

Roleplay Scenario: Your roleplay scenario needs work. I've attached some guidelines below to help you come up with a response that meets our standards. Please try again, and put some time into it.

 

 

If you have any queries or concerns, don't hesitate to reach out to me directly via the Forums with a PM, or contact me on Discord: D A N N Y#2021

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