Jump to content

ImJacob_1

ImJacob

By ImJacob

    • Rules: No
    Referral: Other
    Discord: ImJacob#3754
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: outside the game giving your character and, or the advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making roleplays in your characters favor.
    Status: Denied

He lived in a small elven village before it was attacked by orcs lead by a mysteries man. By the time the ravenged half the village his grandpa had had enough, he grabbed his sword and tried to kill the mysterious man. he was already dead... After the whole village was ransacked the mage and the orcs had left the village, Jassin (my character) was traumatized. He was the only one alive. After that day he devoted his life to finding the evil mage.

Character Name: Jassin
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 25
Physical Description: Skinny, but still muscular
Roleplay Scenario:

Check it for weak spots if it has any, I attack there.

Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

AnimeWolf0080

Upx2iazr67-3Iuv0yc7xHMgTdH8Fy-7Ztall4AmaacZx8deBqc-InuEk9OvqJtSOwoUaCK5XcS8syU0Qh9g01NuAouYxBYbuXWdOUc3Ea4qX64t9g9mPrC6WYhScrB5GSXCNziUn

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  •  Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Character Biography states that his village was ransacked by orcs, this falls under common character tropes please take a look at this guide

  1. https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193362-character-tropes-guide/

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good.

  • Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action.

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like

  1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

  • Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly! (No race has wolf ears)

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

1
Link to comment
Share on other sites
Blake0205

puXoLNPRclLMCWlYtCWMbFuMcpwC8qu_fP1DlBt6fx7NEUCzFd81FvtEgUsznH-yZSEDLuFv1dT8lD7Vkyqcg7KYCLQKIndr84q3QYJutZ8uIYHl29bl_E3uJEOYawyfxcjqppHR

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check above for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...