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Ireheart84


Ireheart84
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Ireheart84#9848
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Using real world knowledge to solve in game problems, when your character would not have that information.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Making your character have all the best traits and stats. So you can be the best of the best with honors and crap.
    Status: Denied

The young dwarf was born into a mining family. His father spent nearly every day in the mine. His mother worked as the mine maiden, ferrying water up and down the mine shafts. The young dwarf's early life was rather simple and calm. Three days before his 18 cycle, a massive cave-in collapsed the part of the mine where his father was working. The news of the cave-in quick spread through the clan and soon reached the young dwarf. As soon as he heard what happened he rushed to the mine, hell bent on saving his father. He worked nonstop for four and half days before fatigue finally set in, the young dwarf began to sway, as the other dwarves rushed off to steady him, his internal forge took light. By the time, the day was over 3 dwarves were in the care of the clan clerics and the trapped miners were found and freed. However due to the young dwarf's unbridled rage the clan sentenced him to exile. A dwarf with so much fire in their heart could not be allowed to stay with the clan. Since that day  the young dwarf has gone by Ireheart and has traveled the land looking for a mine to mine and ale to drink and a good brawl.


Character Name: Ireheart
Character Race: Dwarf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 42
Physical Description: Ireheart stand 5 foot and weighs 149lbs. His fiery red hair make him stand out in a crowd while is soft blue eyes hids the fire burning in his heart.
Roleplay Scenario:

Oi, point me ta the nearest drinkin ‘ole an keep yer hands to ya self. I’ll find ma way from there.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to having too many mistakes, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

 

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references, Please remember to include at least two. These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some,

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 

 

→ Your Character Name includes the last name of an already-existing notable family that is not open to new members. You may not start as a part of an existing family without the head’s permission. I need to see confirmation that you have said permission, or your character will need a different name.

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord AlphaMoist#5682, and I recommend you join the LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→  https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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