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Lord Kokushibo

By Lord Kokushibo

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: mr.sandsman#2400
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: run away and fight with a bow or magic
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: i will do nothing
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Example: (delete this) 

"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…

Character Name: muzan jakson
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Prefer not to say.
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Race
Demon (Progenitor)
Gender
Male
Age
20
Height
179 cm
Screenshot of Skin:
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Amayonnaise

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been set to Pending for now, as we found some areas that need revising.

Don’t worry though - once your changes are made, you’ll be back on track to roleplaying with us in no time.

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail.  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Unfortunately, you cannot play a Demon (Progenitor) as that is not a race available on our Server. If you wish to learn more about our available races, please see the Core Race Master Thread:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199091-core-race-lore-masterthread/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

You have 48 hours to make these changes.

Once your changes are complete, please reach out to me on the forums @Amayonnaise. You can also click on my name here to find my profile.

 

 If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance:

Discord

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions, or to receive help from other players with your pending application.

 

If you need more ideas, or to research more roleplay lore, feel free to check out the Wiki:

Wiki

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub:

New Player Hub

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Amayonnaise

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Unfortunately, your application has been denied. Your 48 hour editing period has passed. However, you are more than welcome to immediately reapply, just remember to edit and change everything listed below:

 

- Your Powergaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Powergaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

You can also learn more about combat roleplay here:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=fIJioVePKYo

 

- Your Metagaming response is a bit too short. Please review our Wiki’s definition of Metagaming. Include an example if you're having a hard time writing something down or don’t know how else to word it. If you need help, please feel free to reach out. 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail.  If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, what they might wear, etc. are all good. 

 

- Your Physical Description doesn’t match the race you picked.

Unfortunately, you cannot play a Demon (Progenitor) as that is not a race available on our Server. If you wish to learn more about our available races, please see the Core Race Master Thread:

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/199091-core-race-lore-masterthread/

 

- Please make sure to include at least six sentences. If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.


- Please remember to include backstory in the Backstory & Roleplay Scenario, even if your persona doesn’t verbally talk about it.

 

- Please remember to add dialogue of your character speaking.

 

- Please make sure to use actions in your backstory/roleplay scenario.

 

If you need help, feel free to contact me via the forums @Amayonnaise or you can also use the LotC Discord to ask another Community Team member for assistance: 

Discord 

Inside the New Players category is a Help channel. Here, you can ping the @Community team with any of your questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the New Player Hub: 

New Player Hub 

 

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