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IXGhoulz

By IXGhoulz

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: IXGhoulz#8864
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: idk
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: idk
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Hello!! Im here to gain power and become the best. 

Character Name: Ghoul
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: tall has black and white hair built and eye color red
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camocat9

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions must be definitions. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!
  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory! Think about where they're from, what their parents were like, why they are how they are…?
  • Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include your definition of roleplay!
  • Your Physical Description states that your character has partially black and partially white hair. While black and white are two possible hair colors for Dark Elves, please try to keep your hair to only having one shade!
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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