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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: planetminecraft.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You state "attempt" or words that indicate an action being tried vs already happening
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: You are getting knowledge that your character does not hold, and since knowledge is power, it is giving your character more power to themselves disturbing the balance of play.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Elowynn Ambergrove
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 20
Physical Description: Elowyn is a smaller elf, 5'6" with dark brown hair streaked with gold (denoting mixed heritage) and amber eyes and having pale skin.
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

"Me?" I ask softly, brows furrowed. I then ask "How long have you been expecting me?

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Blake0205

Changed Status to Under Review

 

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

→ Please make sure to include at least six sentences! If you’re stumped on what to add. I recommend saying where you are from, how was it growing up? Maybe talk about your parents? Ect.

→ Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it

→ Please change your character’s actions to 3rd person.

 

If you do not make these changes within 48 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord @blake0205 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

→ https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page 

→ https://discord.gg/lotc

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.
 

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is blake0205 If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @blake0205

you can join the LotC Discord here: Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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