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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: thesnake#3006
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: telling peole stuff there character would not nkow if they had not told them
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing somthing your catere should not be able to do
    Status: Denied

Adventure brought me to this city. what is this city like?  Is there any work I can do? Do you have any tips or advice on how to be successful in this city?

Character Name: Tegan Stone
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: blue eyes, beard, white hair, gray jacket,
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

→ Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ What abandoned civilizations are you referring to?

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ “thesnake” is not an appropriate character name.

→ Please include at least one positive personality trait/quirk.

→ High Elves don’t have afros. 

→ Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good. 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario Response must have at least one action & whenever the character is talking, it must be in quotes.

→ Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix one!

→ Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

→ Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

https://app.grammarly.com/ 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#3058, and I recommend you join the 

LotC Discord using the following invite: 

→ https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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