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By Lost Eagle

    • Rules: Yes
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    Discord: J-Eagle Gaming#2571
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming means for example that a player in need asks via mail or other socials a member for help. This wouldn't be correct, because the player that gets contacted wouldn't have known what was happening, so it isn't fair.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming means to amplify and esagerate something that is happening. It also means to do something in an unrealistic way and ignoring negative personality traits.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

I was shocked at first when I heard somebody talk  to me and then I answered: "Thank you for welcoming me. You are very gentle. I came here, as you already said, to elevate my place in society and also to have a bit of adventure. In fact, I've never traveled!" I stretched my back and continued talking:" And, may I ask, do you live here? Maybe you could help me orienting myself in this nice city." I waited for his answer...

Character Name: Elduin
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Silvery hair with crimson shiny eyes. The body build is agile and very muscular. Normal height for a dark elf (6,2ft). Weight: 200lb
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to the following reasons. These are the changes that would need to be made so you know what to fix next time!

  • Your Powergaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Please be sure to write your Roleplay Response in the third person!

  • Please amend your Character's Biggest Fear! Death is a very common fear among people, and your character's fear should be something somewhat unique to them that adds to their personality.

  • The capital of the Dark Elves is not the Onyx Sanctum, so I recommend correcting this part of your Character Biography.

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one negative, significant trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality.

  • Crimson eyes are not rare amongst Dark Elves, so I recommend correcting this part of your Character Biography as well.

  • (For future reference - /d20 is a command that instantly kills you and sends you back to Cloud Temple, the respawn point. For further clarification, DM me on discord!)

 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord: teawithsarah#0808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

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