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Jakow

Jakow

By Jakow

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    Discord: jakow1243
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To avoid powergaming in roleplay, players should say they're trying something instead of just saying it works right away. This gives other players a chance to react. (Sorry for bad language: I´m German :))
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It gives players an unfair advantage. It allows them to use information that their characters shouldn't know, leading to unrealism and unfairness.
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

"Um, hi there," he mumbles awkwardly, stumbling over his words. "You expectet me, why is that so mam?" He tries straighten up but bump into the celing of the tent. "Oh, iam sorry mam. My story you want to here? Eh... sure: Well, I... I was born in the wilderness and yes... Abbie was it who found me and took me home to her. She fed me... yes every day. And... and she played with me as well as her friend... Grimm was his name. He called me Boulderfist because I was so strong. Hahaha." He laughs but then falls silent: "But then one day they disapeared. Abbie and Grimm disapeared. They weren´t theire anymore, do you understand mam?" he becomes watery eyes, "the masked mans killed them I knew it," he clenches his fists. " And then I went to theire camp and slougter them, i killed them all durning the night", he continues. Silence. "Then I fleed from this place... And since many years now I try to find a new home. I do every work i can. I just want a place i can call home."

Character Name: Bran Boulderfist
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 29
Physical Description: He is intimidating, taller than ordinary humans, broad, muscular, a littl ugly and exuding a rugged aura. He has green eyes, a brown beard& brown hair
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Javert

Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

Your physical description is a little vague. My recommendation is instead of saying "He is intimidating", say "He stands at a fearsome height of 6'1" or whatever you want the height of the character to be. Just remember to keep it within the bounds of the Human lore.

I saw that you said you are German and have a hard time with language. That is perfectly fine! We recommend you use spell-checking websites to help you smooth out your spelling, as we understand learning a new language can be hard. One such website is Grammarly, which I will attach here. Feel free to try it out to help with spelling! https://www.grammarly.com/

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is ragnarakajavvy! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @Javert!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here: https://discord.gg/lotc

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pinging @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

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Javert

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below.

 

Make sure to add more details to your physical description! As mentioned in the previous comment, you should try descriptors like their exact height (6'1, 5'0, etc) and be overall more detailed

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is ragnarakajavvy! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @Javert.

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! https://discord.gg/lotc

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached.

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Special:RecentChanges

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