JarlSunshine

You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application.
 

• Your Character Biography appears to have a decent story-line, however, It includes some lore pieces that are not relevant to LotC and are more based on real life: ‘His land was named after the Germanic tribes of old, Germania’ and all the other pieces that speak about the Germans in some way.
• Your Character Biography appears to be lacking in regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC WIki. This could include, city names, religions, et cetera. 
• Your Roleplay Scenario appears to be good, but it is missing some action- It needs to be an action and text emote.
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 

Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.
 

• Your Character Biography appears to have a decent story-line, however, It includes some lore pieces that are not relevant to LotC and are more based on real life: ‘His land was named after the Germanic tribes of old, Germania’ and all the other pieces that speak about the Germans in some way.
• Your Character Biography appears to be lacking in regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC WIki. This could include, city names, religions, et cetera. 
• Your Roleplay Scenario appears to be good, but it is missing some action- It needs to be an action and text emote.
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.