Jump to content

jasminnorthway

jasminnorthway

By jasminnorthway

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: If the player Ailan113 is in a nation discord, and received a PM from one of his friends to get online because "there are raiders in the city", and then Ailan113 got online and ran halfway across the map to help defend his friends, he would be Metagaming
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: If the player Ailan113 emoted, while playing a frail elderly character: "John ran along the edge of the rooftop, jumping across the opening to the alleyway below to reach the roof of the adjacent building." Ailan113 would be Powergaming, because it is unr
    Status: Denied

“I dont know”

Character Name: Raeya
Character Race: Forest Dwarf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: she has light purple hair grey eyes , a average body type and height.
Screenshot of Skin:
Go to applications

User Feedback

Recommended Comments

Nozgoth

Changed Status to Under Review

 

4G463rjQfbdr3U_S4OPNWc5Dw1BsK8u3Js9CM_gORhq7CBMmmXvEBJo-W1iqOD6SCU3xkSAuOWiWRi55LuIC8NAsiyl6UmSRcfwtjZJXx3DjCbAyqSHPnHk-x6U2pK-1CVC6XOEo

 

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • In your character-bio, you stated that you are a forest elf, which does not exist – I believe you meant wood elf. Then in your race you put forest dwarf. Also, you need two lore references for valid LOTC lore. Next, it’s not clear you are fully getting the theme of LOTC judging on your bio, please revise and reapply if you want. Finally, you stated that your character is 15 in the bio, even though you aren’t allowed to apply under 18 and you put 18 for the age under the bio.
  • In your physical description, you should add more details and information.
  • In your personality traits/quirks, you should add more details and information. Also, you are lacking a negative trait.
  • Your roleplay scenario is heavily lacking, you should add actions – more text and you need at least 4 sentences.

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @ NOZway#5616, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpNa 

Link to comment
Share on other sites

  • Recently Browsing   0 members

    No registered users viewing this page.

×
×
  • Create New...