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JaySonZvhal


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    Referral: minecraftservers.org
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A player in game knowing something they would know in game
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Type out actions that the defending party can’t defend from (ex. He would spin around and cut jak
    Status: Denied

Jay zvhal was born and abandoned in the city of Petrus. While being on the streets he learned how to defend himself and do some minor skilled pickpocketing.while living in the city he was betrayed by people he kept close. While going outside the city limits for a hunt he was kidnapped and used as a test subject for multiple spells . As a result one of the spells had the effect of changing a patch of his hair white and his eyes a deep shade of red ,almost crimson. He wants to rid the world of evil but is always made to seem like he is the bad guy while he is just trying to help. While only being human he can hold his own against two bandits. He can be arrogant at times but he means well.


Character Name: Jay zvhal
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: Jay zvhal ,17, confident,arrogant, alone
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Your application has been denied.

Let's get started on the reasons.

-Your Metagaming definition is incorrect.

-In your bio, Petrus is a lore reference, but that city has not existed in several irl years. "He can hold his own against two bandits" can also be construed as power-gaming, and should be adjusted. So please try and adjust your lore references to a more up to date example and adjust those lines.

-Your age listed for him and the age listed in your description do not match.

-Your description needs to be slightly better. We're looking for a physical description.

Please fix these and reapply.

I recommend creating a forum account for your reapplication so we can simply let you edit the app if anything is incorrect.

You can also join the New Player Discord for further assistance:
https://discord.gg/rb4WY5

We hope to see you adventuring soon!

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