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jellybeam138
  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    Discord: Spongbob#6187
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: like athore players
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: normale
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.


Character Name: sorro
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 30
Physical Description: normal
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As you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, but fear not, below I’ve noted why!

 

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definitions and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help!

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Physical Description needs to be purely physical! Don’t include anything personality-wise in there. 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

  • Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits. 

  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 


 

Do you still need help? Feel free to send me a message over the forums, or if I’m online, you can message me with /message CanadaMatt

For a faster reply, add me on discord @ 10matthewc9#9809

If you want some extra assistance, I recommend you review the wiki and join the LotC Discord.

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