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Jermurder

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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: Nutshell#4669
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: metagaming is a term often used to describe players use of assumed characteristics of the game in particular metagaming often refers to having an ingame character act on knowledge that the player has access to but the character should not
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: metagaming Never use meta information to win manipulate or script a certain outcome in roleplay
    Status: Denied

I said pleas..ure.. to meet you... You said why does your voice be like that? are u scared or something? i am friendly. i said thank you and i smiled. I will continue and look around here.

Character Name: Acahael
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 45
Physical Description: pastel blue eyes white/gray hair and medium long hair 1meters tall 40kg
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→ Your Powergaming Definition is incorrect. Please review our Wiki’s definition and correct yours accordingly! I recommend including an example so I know you fully understand. Let me know if you need any help.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming 

→ Please ensure that you include an example for your powergaming and metagaming definitions.

→ Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

→ Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

→ Your character's height is too small for their race.

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=High_Elves 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario must include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes and one action. 

→ Your Roleplay Scenario must be in third person.

→ Your character’s biggest fear can’t be death because everyone is afraid of death. Maybe change it to betrayal since you mentioned your friend betraying you.

→ Your character’s biggest fear should be at least two sentences. 

→ What your character likes and dislikes about themselves should be at least two sentences. 

→ Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.


After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord HogoBojo#0001. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX

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