JesusNabi

Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to multiple reasons, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
• Your Character Biography states that your character was raised by a phoenix. These do not exist in LOTC lore, nor could your character be approached by any 'mythical' creature in such a fashion! Please change this accordingly.
• Your Physical Description states that your character has white hair. It is not possible for a 20-year-old human to have naturally white hair! Check out this LOTC wiki page on humans for more information!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Humans
• Your Roleplay Scenario Response must include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @camocat9#9373, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Hub for further help: https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/