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JhoyJhonn

By JhoyJhonn

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    Discord: DJ Jhonn#3464
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Meta-gaming is the act of taking information you acquire out of character and using it as if your character would know that, when it doesn't.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Power-gaming is maximizing your skill sets to combo in the best way possible, specializing in some aspect of the game.
    Status: Denied

Arborg was one of the greatest combat killers, a gigantic being with a lot of strength who was capable of destroying most of the army before his allies even arrived... But in one of those battles the Arborg was hit by a stone and fell unconscious to the floor, he had already given up everything and accepted his death, but when he woke up he found a dwarf covering him, and waiting for him to wake up... As soon as he got up he swore never to leave a stricken wounded ally in battle, from that day on. Coming from a family of guerrillas, he trained as a combatant since childhood. When he was a teenager he was already a brutal mercenary who, unlike the others, had the target's head as proof that he completed the mission... As an adult, he was hired by a king for the purpose of destroying army... For every soldier killed in battle he would receive 4 gold pieces. However, when he went to receive the gold, the king denied it... So the Arborg cut off the king's head, and threw it at the feet of his people, and left the kingdom, vowing never to fight for ideals again.


His hands and legs are slightly green due to his half-orc heritage, although the rest of his body is tanned. He has scars in both of his arms, where he was burnt with chains, and as any soldier he has a collection of battle scars to prove his worth. He rarely wears a top and just as rarely wears a smile.

Character Name: Arborg
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 48
Physical Description: Arborg is a 8' 3" tall half-orc, weighting over 400 pounds in pure muscle
Roleplay Scenario:

Arborg after murdering the king of the other continent, he travels on a boat alone, looking for new lands to dominate .... and ends up arriving in LotC

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Mescaffier

Changed Status to Under Review

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Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Unfortunately, orcs cannot be more than 8 feet tall. I see that you’re a Half-Orc, though, there would still be no reason to be this tall. For more information, check https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Uruks.
  • Lands outside of the Arcas cannot be accessed. For this reason, you’re not allowed to have ‘sailed across the ocean to LOTC lands’. Apologies!
    In your backstory, you must include, at least, 2 lore references. This can be names of battles, sieges, towns, etc! You can find anything you need to know here: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page.
  • Your backstory is an example of powergaming. While orcs are powerful, a single one cannot defeat an army – nor should they be able to take out a king. Please rewrite it, and tone it down a bit!

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on discord @TreeSmoothie#2018 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Guide as well.

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Mescaffier

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Your application has unfourtunately been denied at this time due to not fixing the problems listed above and below, though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

  • Unfortunately, orcs cannot be more than 8 feet tall. I see that you’re a Half-Orc, though, there would still be no reason to be this tall. For more information, check https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Uruks.
  • Lands outside of the Arcas cannot be accessed. For this reason, you’re not allowed to have ‘sailed across the ocean to LOTC lands’. Apologies!
    In your backstory, you must include, at least, 2 lore references. This can be names of battles, sieges, towns, etc! You can find anything you need to know here: https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page.
  • Your backstory is an example of powergaming. While orcs are powerful, a single one cannot defeat an army – nor should they be able to take out a king. Please rewrite it, and tone it down a bit!


After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on discord @TreeSmoothie#2018, and I recommend you join the LotC discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F. Lastly, take a look at the New Player Guide for further help: 

 

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