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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: The limits of agency in roleplay are similar to the limits of agency in our own society. Specifically, your character ends where someone else's begins. Good roleplay is a lot like improvisational theater, where the practice is to offer an action or development that the co-performer can then deny or accept.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: META or Most Effective Tactics Available is concerned with instrumental play, centered around concrete goals or "winning" for a lack of a better term. Roleplay is an expression of free play: satisfaction is not derived from game-sanctioned states and conquests but from the act of roleplaying itself. Metagaming is disruptive because it is incompatible with the premise of play being engaged. A good roleplayer isn't trying to attain rewards or a specific game state, but is instead creating stories and memories through play.
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Eloy Rhayader
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 24
Physical Description: Eloy Rhayader is a pale High Elf male of tall stature and thin build. His raven-black hair is long and straight. He wears proper, foppish outfits.
Roleplay Scenario:

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))


Glancing at the cushion, the newcomer smirks as he sits down. "I am come looking for a smith,"  he says.

 

"A smith is many things. A wordly worker, patient in his strength yet strong in his patience. However,"  the crone tilts her head, as if trying to discern something her eyes can't quite tell her. "You, of elfin features. Your kind is concerned with the higher callings, are they not? Of art, and magic. One would think you above such menial tasks as fashioning tools for peasants."

 

"Doubtless, o witch. But certainly you would be aware that in these swamps hermits a smith thrice accomplished: a monk, a mage and a warrior. This elusive soul, I am told, has discovered the secret of imbuing the physical with the metaphysical, a marriage of steel and apocrypha, enchanted blades, hammers, diggers and picks."  The crone seems enthralled, and gestures with her hand, that the young one may continue.

 

"Hear ye, o witches all: I am Eloy Rhayader. I aim to create instruments of magic to show the heavens their limit!"

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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server and have been accepted for at least two weeks. If you have any questions please message me!
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it.

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “I’m new and would like some help with my application. I got put on pending!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario & Backstory states that you know how to use magic! Please know that you can’t learn how to use magic until you are on the server and have been accepted for at least two weeks. If you have any questions please message me!
  • Please remember to include backstory in the Back story & Roleplay Scenario! Even if your persona doesn’t talk about it.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

My discord is Anime_Wolf0080! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums @AnimeWolf0080

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

I recommend going to the New player’s category, going to help chat. Pining @Community team saying “Hello, I got denied, can someone help me with my new application! I’d like to try again!” If I or another team member can not be reached. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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