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  • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: coop.i
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: I avoid powergaming by making sure I am on level with the people I play with.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It makes roleplaying unfair and not fun
    Status: Denied

You’ve just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As you look around, your gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. You duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? she begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?))

Otto sits down cross legged with is hands on his knees, "I come for the thrill of adventure and simply because I love helping people, about 8 years ago I was chasing a pickpocket that had recently stolen a sack with some of my money in it when I cam across a woman, she had had her husband stolen from her in the night by some loan sharks, so I set off to find him, figured the pickpocket would need the gold more anyways. After I successfully got the woman her husband back, I figured I'm rather good at helping people and decided id set out to do just that


Character Name: Otto Brumwitch
Character Race: Orc
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: 450lb, 5'10, black hair, brown eyes
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✿You’re on the right track!  just a few things you need to change!

✿Happy belated birthday! It seems your age has changed between your applications. If you have not had a birthday, please make sure to include your correct age on the application. 

 

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 


 

✿ On that note Roleplay scenarios & background must be at least 6 sentences or more.  It doesnt seem like your roleplay scenario mirrors the character you've picked make sue throughout your app everything fits within each other :Race, age, gender.

 

✿Your Physical description  is good, But it  doesn't seem to match the character you made. Your skin and Physical description do not match! 

 

You only have 24 hours to make the requested changes before this application is denied. You do not need to post a new application to make these fixes; you can simply edit this current application. If you have any questions about how to make these corrections, please contact me on Discord: Tigergiri.  If you don’t have Discord, please message me in the forums here! 

If you need to contact me or need help, you can always join the LotC Discord here

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki!

Lastly, here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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✿Happy belated birthday! It seems your age has changed between your applications. If you have not had a birthday, please make sure to include your correct age on the application. 

 

✿ Your Powergaming method, seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 

 

✿ Your Metagaming reasoning,  seems to be a little underdeveloped. Make sure to give actual methods or explain your reasoning more. If you need some help, read over our wiki --->Here our definitions. 


 

✿ On that note Roleplay scenarios & background must be at least 6 sentences or more.  It doesnt seem like your roleplay scenario mirrors the character you've picked make sue throughout your app everything fits within each other :Race, age, gender.

 

✿Your Physical description  is good, But it  doesn't seem to match the character you made. Your skin and Physical description do not match! 

 


 

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through discord (Tigergiri), my forum account, or on the server (Tigergiri)

You are also encouraged to join our  LOTC Discord , a great place in which you can ask questions toward our staff, and mix with the general LOTC community. If you need any additional help please look at our New player guide 

You may reapply at anytime however please make the above changes before you do so. 

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