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By jkr777

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: JoshuaRaider #2679
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: the act of learning something out of game that could benefit your character Ingame.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: doing actions that are impossible to do, are inherently overpowered, or are an absolute
    Status: Denied

Joshua walks up to the sign that says new journeys start here

/me he looks up at the sign grinning

he opens the door to a black smith store with swords and shields hanging up to display

He asks the Blacksmith "Would you be willing to hire me?"

The blacksmith grunts" No i cant have any mistakes around these hot anvils!

Joshua walks out of the blacksmith store

Character Name: Joshua Grega
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: 5'10, skinny in stature, He wears a torn Shirt shirt, Brown pants and beat up brown boots.
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should not include any of your character's thoughts.

  • You must not control any other characters but your own in your Roleplay Scenario Response

  • Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI




Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above

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