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    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Metagaming is when you use information that your character is roleplaying
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powergaming is when you build your character to be good at a thing
    Status: Denied

Character Name: Ievos Wranvalur
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 67
Physical Description: A Dark elf, determind to get revenge for his mother. Grey hair, between pale and non pale skin, skinny.



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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Thank you for applying for Lord of The Craft but unfortunately, your application has been put under...

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✦ Powergaming definitions seem to be a bit mixed up with another source, please do check the definition and see if you can change it. Possibly give us an example.

 

✦ Your biography needs lack the required one lore reference, the wiki is a good place for that and you can refer to anything about the world. It could be about when your character was born, the city that they may have lived et cetera. Consider expanding your biography as well as this is a roleplay server and your character must have a backstory.

 

✦ Your character descriptions seem rather lackluster, try to add something about the characters features like color of their hair, eyes or how tall they might be.

 

✦ Consider expanding your "Interesting Facts" to full sentences.

 

 

Your application was good but good enough to be truly perfect. Though fret not as you have 24 hours to make the changes.

I recommend that you check out the "New Player Discord" and wiki when times allow it!

 Feel free to contact me on the forums, in game (/m MadYeAd) or over at discord with a simple tag - MadYeAd#6091.

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Hey this is JMonkey11 I will make those changes, but I will have to do it a different forum. when I posted that I was a guess, then I made a account so I don't think I can edit it.

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