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Joalfl

By Joalfl

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Joalfl#5269
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Using something out of character that your character won't know about.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: To perform an godly feat and forcing emotes on other characters.
    Status: Denied

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. You must show an understanding of quoted dialogue and exposition throughout the scenario.

Vars Malir: I am not here for those things

He continues to walk 

?: well you must be here for something

Vars Malir: To fulfill a duty

?: Aw another one of those types uh

Vars Malir: What type?

?: Nothing

Vars Malir: If you say so

Character Name: Vars Malir
Character Race: Adunian
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 18
Physical Description: Height: 5'11
He is wearing a knight's outfit, but the helmet covers everything but the eyes.
Eyes: Brown and green
Screenshot of Skin:
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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

 

→  Your Biography must include at least one lore reference.
→ Your Biography Is rather difficult to understand some of the grammar and the formatting of it is a bit confusing. 

→ Your Skin is not appropriate for LotC (Have a look at these ones) Skin Archive.

→Your Skin should match your Physical description

→Your Personality Traits/Quirks Must include at least one significant disadvantage.

→Your Persona’s Fear must be at least two sentences long

→ Your Role Play scenario must be four sentences long

→ Your Role Play scenario must Include at least one action

→ Your persona’s Biography should NOT be a commonly used trope. Parents killed by bandits. Parents killed by orcs.Etc…

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After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord mady#9397. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC  Discord as well. https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 

 

 

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