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Jappleseed

By Jappleseed

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: using knowledge while roleplaying that your character probably wouldn't know, giving him/her an advantage.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Playing unfairly, basically playing outrageously, and making overpowered or godly things happen.
    Status: Denied

Trask Ravenwhisk was born to a wealthy agriculture family, his father being an overseer of a patch of farmland within Orem. As a boy, Trask was told of his father's adventures as a young soldier in the Rubern War (1740-1760) and ever since then it has been his goal to become a high ranking military officer. However, his father's wishes for him to become a farm overseer conflicted with this, and it came to a boiling point when he left home at 18, following a fight with his father. Despite this, Trask still respects his father greatly and admires his loyalty and hard work. Ever since leaving home, Trask has gone from place to place throughout the land, looking for work and trying to find a way into the life of a military officer.

Character Name: Trask Ravenwhisk
Character Race: Heartlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 22
Physical Description: Trask Ravenwhisk is around 6 feet tall and 175 lbs, sandy blonde hair, blue eyes, fit, wearing leather boots and traveling clothes
Roleplay Scenario:

Read the scenario below this box and type out inside of this box how your character might respond. Your response must be at least four sentences long and include at least one action and at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotes.

 

"Oh, Hello! This city really is lovely, indeed. Very....big. I'm just passing through. I am looking for work, though. I'm sort of unemployed at the moment. Do you know of any....Oh my goodness! I completely forgot to introduce myself!" Trask holds out his hand. "I'm Trask, And you are?"

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Your application has been put on pending as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows: 

  •  Your definitions for powergaming and metagaming are on the right track, but maybe provide an example of both to show you fully understand. 

  •  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • Reminder to speak in the third person for your roleplay scenario. 

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please message me on Discord at __Soph#3808 to let me know, or if you don’t have a Discord, send me a forum message, and please do ask if you have any questions. 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the
LotC  Discord as well.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied at this time due to reason, though here are the changes that would need to be made:

  •  Your definitions for powergaming and metagaming are on the right track, but maybe provide an example of both to show you fully understand. 

 

  •  Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

 

  • Reminder to speak in the third person for your roleplay scenario. 

 

  • Did not make any revisions during the 24 hours. 

 

After correcting the above things, you may re-apply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord __Soph#3808. If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining the LotC Discord as well. 

https://discord.gg/7sTjWYX 


 

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