judebot374

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

• Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye colour, hair colour, hair length, etc. are all good.

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.

• Your Character's Aspirations Response is too short and must be at least two sentences long. It should also tie into your Character Biography.

• Make sure your Character's Aspirations Response  ties into your Character Biography!

• Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 

• Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please amend this accordingly!

• Your Skin does not match your character’s race. Please correct this accordingly and take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like. Alternatively, you can change your character’s race to match your skin!

  • https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

• Make sure your Character Fear Response ties into your character’s personality traits/quirks.

• Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

• Please make sure that all dialogue in your Roleplay Scenario Response is surrounded by quotation marks.

• Your Character Fear Response is too short and should be at least two sentences long. It should also explain why your character developed this fear and tie into your character’s personality traits.

• Please make sure to explain what caused your character to develop their fear in your Character Fear Response!

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

• https://app.grammarly.com/

   

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Lickspittle#3413]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message Lickspittle to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! https://discord.gg/lotc

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki!