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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Google
    Discord: juzorei#5285
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: When the person controlling the character makes them act out of character simply because they have learnt something new and wish to add it to that character, using their knowledge and giving this to their character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: It is making your character over powered, and giving it an unfair advantage compared to other characters by controlling what they react with/how they are affected by your characters actions.
    Status: Denied

'Change,' She replied ,'I came seeking change from my simple life back home, aspiring to educate myself higher and experience an adventure whilst im at it!' His smile was met with hers, radiating the same warmth.

Character Name: Elaine Quixina
Character Race: High Elf
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: Long cream hair, fair skin contrasting against pale green eyes, gold grey and teal attire to compliment her eyes. slender build and lightweight, 6'1ft
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Carson

Changed Status to Under Review

Your application has been put on pending, as there are changes needing to be made before you may be accepted, as follows:

 

  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes, and one action!
  • Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography!
  • Your Character Fear must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
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  • Your Character Goal must include what drives your character towards that goal instead of just the goal itself! Also, side note that it's not allowed to know any alchemy or magic without having found a teacher in game! Elaine can have that goal toward finding a teacher once you start playing her, though!
  • A side note, Elaine is a human name-- perhaps select something more Elven? You can find them on fantasy name generators.

 

If you do not make these changes within 24 hours, your application will be denied. When you are finished, please send me a forum PM with any questions you might have.

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki, and I highly recommend joining our discord and reading through the New Player Hub as well for all important links and info!

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Carson

Hey! Unfortunately, I've had to **deny** your application for not having made the edits in the allotted time! You're free to reapply at any time.


Here's a link to your application again for easier access: 

And I would also highly suggest joining the LOTC official discord for easier access to help, for events, announcements, etc:
https://discord.com/invite/fwEQA2F

Also, if you want to find more information on the server lore, just check out the wiki on the link below!
https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

Finally, feel free to familiarize yourself with the New Player Hub for when you are accepted! It includes commands, and other useful things for when you are accepted!
https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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