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Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story.”

((How do you respond?)) Throfinn sits down before the old woman, eyeing the surroundings in the tent. He’d sigh, and inhale before speaking, "my story start as when I was a young boy". I heard my father's story's about him going to war. He was a legend story's that was told around by village. His named was Horaged the brave a men well-spoken. On what Seage battle one day I hid in his ship wanting to see it for myself and when we was out on sea there was an ambush by pirates.  I watch my father die right in front of me by getting stabbed in the back by Alithar a pirate. I rushed to my father while screaming "No" then tripped over a crew arm landing a puddle of blood my face and cloths where cover. I look it and I was by my father side his last word to me was "live do better by me not becoming how i was i love you son and live on." i watch the color of his eye fade like his soal left hit body all i could say is "FATHER NOO FATHER STAY WITH ME FATHER!" then "boom" a hit in the back of my head. i stand up with a big breath mam im sorry this story is hard to tell just one moment please. i walk out cabin to look at the swamp taking a big breath and say well i guess it time ti finish my tell "I walk back it" "mam im ready to fish my tale" "As i stare i the sharp lit candle" i was started to fade like i was going to sleep. I remember what happened replaying in my head like it was all a dream i woke up on my father ship "It must have been a dream i said" rushed to the upper deck and there they were what i thought was my father i rushed to see him yelling father and when he turn it was Alithar the pirate. i stop but my head down. "he's dead isn't he?" Alithar said "yes" i wanted to cry but it was like any emotion was gone i felt num. They captured me and made me one of their ship mates. I was treated poorly and promised once I get the chance. "I will kill Alithar and his crew." Few years go by they used me on scouting missions to see what treasure all these villages had to offer. One night it was a dark and storming morning and i felt the time has come. "I rush and started slotering the crew for what they have done to me and my father". But when the time came, I found that Alithar was not there. "I rushed to the ship but all I saw was an empty dock while a ship sailed away" I tried to catch up but he was far away. "I yelled at the top of my lungs I will find you and I will kill you". So, I built me a new ship sail. As i was build my ship i slit my hand open "Dang my hand that hurt" "I tour my shirt to make a bandage to cover it up, so it doesn't get infected" finally after a couple of weeks my chip was Buit. 'Now it time to set sail" back home to my village Thron-crow finally seeing my family out of many years now. Times has passed. I've gotten older been stuck on finding the man that killed my father and avenge him and my clan.  I'm a warrior now that have pelage across the savage seas with my crew, and I was on a scouting mission to find more town to pillage. But then something took our ship down under the ocean sea. I can't believe what I saw all my brothers and sister all dead I was laying in the deep dark oceans waiting for my time of death but then. I woke up here but what took my ship out was that pirate named alithar. "I'm on his trail and I know I will find him even if it takes everything I have left I will find him." As the sun blossoms in the sky."I stand up plunder into my thought" Mam I must take my leave and travel to my next adventure I apricate your hospitality. "IN TELL NEXT TMIE" As I run east for what is next for me.  

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"Oh, I just, uh…" you stutter, tensing up. You eye the crone, then back outside the tent. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…