Khaedross

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Metagaming and Powergaming definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there, metagaming & powergaming in LoTC have more specific implications. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some! Additionally you mention several things like your character's uncle being a giant, a shadow attacking your character's family, a sorcerer helping your persona's father recover and learning about witches. All of these are things that do not exist easily in lore or that you will need to discover through Roleplay. 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
• Your Character Fear is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's fear connects with their biography! It must be a fear that is unique to them-- for example, everyone is afraid of death.
• You forgot to fill your Roleplay Scenario Response.

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. When you are done correcting, please contact me!

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Soul#9694]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message SoulReapingWolf to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!

Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why. 

You failed to make the corrections within the time given.

Don’t worry though! If you want to submit a new serious application feel free to try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me through the forums or through discord [ Soul#9694 ]. If you see me around ingame, you can also /message SoulReapingWolf to ask me things there. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord.

 I would also recommend that you have a look around the Wiki!