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    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: A game where the set rules you're given can be used efficiently to over come even the best of players
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Where you try to maximise the amount of progress towards a particular goal or requirement
    Status: Denied

Edward Charles William Shretter was born in the Kingdom of Norland. Edward is also of royal decent and likes to let people know. 

Born in 1738 to Charles Albert Shretter and Elizabeth Mary Schretter.

Edward is a polite young man who is accepting and likes to let people know how he feels and likes to be in charge and a leader when he needs to be. Edward takes his duties very seriously and is willing to do whatever it takes to make plans go his own way.  He is brave in battles and wars and will defend his country till the end. When Edward was young he used to love playing in the rolling hills of Norland and the lush thick forests, it has made Edward a loving person of nature. 

His mother and father died when he was young and his grandmother Mary Anne Shretter looked after him until he was 18.

When he was 19 he joined the military and due to an accident he has a uncontrollable stutter.  


Character Name: Edward Charles William Shretter
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 37
Physical Description: Edward is of a stocky build, blue eyed, has a short moustache, well dressed in military uniform and very handsome for someone his age.
Roleplay Scenario: The traveller has just arrived in a small town. As they look around, their gaze is met with run down houses and shops. They duck into one of the shacks, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the small room, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town?" She begins, then pauses to study their face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a chair, “Where do you come from? What do you hope to make of yourself?”

((How does your character respond? Please ensure your response is at least six sentences long, and uses at least two actions.))

Example: (delete this when you add your own)

"Oh, I just, uh…" The traveler stutters, tensing up. They eye the crone, then back outside the shack. For a moment, the air thickens with anticipation, until…
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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Your application has been:

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For the following reasons:

Unfortunately I must deny you rather than placing you on pending because you are on a guest account and thusly unable to edit your application. For future apps I strongly suggest a forum account.

Your definitions are each incorrect, please feel free to reference our wiki pages on each for help, just make sure to write them in your own words.

Your application says he was born in 1738, but the current year in roleplay is 1642, how is that possible?

He can not be of noble descent at all, please remove this fact.

You might want to read up on Norland, because there are no rolling hills or thick forests, it is a rocky archipelago.

Your skin seems to be something like American Revolution UK, but we are a fantasy medieval server, it might be best to change it.

 

If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI

 

Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in 3 hours.

 

This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted!

 

If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

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