MickMeist

Your application has been: On behalf of the Application Team, and LoTC as a whole, I’d like to welcome you to our community! You will be implemented shortly, during this brief wait I implore you to visit our WIKI and continue reading up on server lore. This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted! If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues! Can’t wait to see you roleplaying!

Your application has been: For the following reasons: Pending time expired. If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in when you like. This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted! If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

Your application has been: For the following reasons: Pending time expired. If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI Worry not! This is not the end of the world, and you may re-apply in when you like. This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted! If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

Your application has been placed on… Your powergaming definition isn't quite right, you can use our wiki definition I link below to get a better grasp on it. He can not come from somewhere that isn't in our server lore, you can read up on our lore on the wiki. Your bio must be at least a full paragraph in length, and include specific references to our lore. Kung Fu isn't something rp'd on LoTC, Magic is too broad, and so is Atlas. Your 3 facts must include a weakness. Your skin isn't quite roleplay appropriate, you can use this archive for reference, but remember not to plagiarise If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted! If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

Changed Status to Under Review Your application has been placed on… You'll need to extend your bio to be a full paragraph. You will need to include a weakness in your 3 interesting facts. If any of the reasons I stated involve the wiki, this link will take you right to the home page, where you can find quick links to the metagaming and power emoting definitions, as well as look around to browse our server lore! WIKI Being placed on Pending means that your application was solid, though there are still some issues present that need a bit of tweaking. You’ve got 24 hours to make them using the [Edit] feature of the forum. Whenever you make any changes, contact me and I will review the application once more. After 24 hours your app will either be Accepted or Denied This discord link:https://discord.gg/eySYjqw is the link to our New Player Discord, feel free to join and ask any questions you’d like, as well use it as a tool once you are accepted! If you’ve got any questions at all, feel free to message me on the forums, at my Discord, MickMeist#0001, or on the server with the /msg MickMeist command, or the /atreq command will allow you to place a ticket for assistance with myself of one of my colleagues!

is that something like adding a stanza prior to "We strive.." or establishing the speaker's identity during the already existing opening lines? I've tinkered with various versions of it but they all seem to suffer from this issue unless I'm reading it aloud to someone

Why choose a period? Lawrence McCarter (fuckin mickmeist yo) We strive to succeed in every aspect of life. Reaching, for that next big moment, through miles of toil and strife. And when any given one of these moments may last a myriad Of months or years I ask you. “Why choose a period?” In my case, I marched on that mat until my feet bled I hit that drum in that exact rhythm enough times that it would be months before those notes and melodies stopped running through my head. And while there might be minute details or some little things that I would go back and change, The reality is that my performance on that last stage was a gift to myself with no receipt for an exchange. Let me give you a scenario. Its simple enough, it goes like this: “Hello.” “I made this.” “I dedicated the last four years of my life to it.” “I’m happy about it.” Whoever that is I pray he doesn’t exist because that display was not passion During my magnum opus I would protest the war in Vietnam with extreme dissatisfaction My best friend would scream and shout to that crowd that he had a voice And as each moment passed every fiber of my being rejoiced. I left a piece of my soul behind with that performance, and thus came the end of a four year narration All I can say is that, whoever’s writing my story, I’m glad they chose an exclamation. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is the first of a series of poems I wrote about punctuation for a mix of reasons from class to hobbying to feeling cosmically obligated to do so. Posting it here primarily to get feedback and constructive advice from the plethora of incredible writers in our community, and secondarily to maybe spur myself into writing again because I'm lazy and haven't in a few months. Be as harsh or cushiony as you like, I just wanna get better yo. Also like if you wanna see the show this was based on its in this spoiler, unfortunately it isn't the championship performance I wrote with in mind because copyright and I couldn't get ahold of the video, so the show had changed a bunch during the season after this point but the message and overall feel/sound of the show was about the same.