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KingDeer

By KingDeer

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Sean ty#3721
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Doing things out of character something like getting a message on skype saying that your base has been blown up by a other clan you get on to stop the raiders this would be metagaming
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: powergaming is Doing overpowered things for instance speeding running 500 mph across the earth
    Status: Denied

 trakaal is single and hoping to find a partner sometime soon he hates getting hurt he will get angry and attack others to release his anger also while saying hurtful things to others around him he was born and raised in goblin town in a small home with his father tir and his mother ceh trarkaal had no brothers or sisters both raised trakaal until he was about 10 when tir left his son trarkaal and his wife ceh to take care of resource gathering but never returned ceh was stuggling to take care of trakaal because of his mecheif with other goblins by the time trakaal was 23 he moved out to start his own life he looked for a home in middle earth ponto dogwood a hobit took him in and shared a home with him for free ponto was a hunter for middle earth and trakaal was chosen as a guard for middle earth he has not made any new friends other then his housemate pronto dogwood but is still willing to make beyond pronto dogwood when he makes these friend trakaal hopes they move to middle earth and they become neighbors 

Character Name: trarkaal
Character Race: Goblin
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 34
Physical Description: trarkaal has green eyes big eyebrows has Beaten Armour from his travels his weight is 36 pounds and is 3 feet tall and he has golden ear rings
Roleplay Scenario:

Hello I am here to check out this amazing city my name is trarkaal how are you today

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Ayo! Thank you for applying to Lord of the Craft. After reviewing your application,

I’ve picked out a few things that may need to be changed to pass our application process.


You have 24 hours to edit on the following changes.

  • Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. Please bare in mind to use capitalization and punctuation, because what you just wrote is only counted as one big run on sentence. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.
  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits
  • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.

When you have made the changes, feel free to

 contact me through discord at @mightbepan#9864 or shoot me a PM over the forums. If you require 

further assistance, contact me or any Community Staff Member found 

in our New Player Discord.

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Your application has been denied because you did not make these changes within the 24 hours you were given.

→ Here are the changes you had to make.

 

  • Your backstory requires at least ten sentences and at least one direct lore reference. The name of a nation is not considered a lore reference, neither is the name of a race nor a year. Please bare in mind to use capitalization and punctuation, because what you just wrote is only counted as one big run on sentence. You can refer to the server’s Wikia Page for support.
  • Your personality traits need to be rewritten. It must include at least two positive traits and one negative trait. It must also be 1-3 sentences. If you need help, sometimes I use this website: Personality Traits
  • Your roleplay response needs an action, not just dialogue. You may use the example to figure out how to format your response.
  • You made a new app because you were unable to fix this character, as requested this app would be denied.

You may reapply at any time.

 

If you find yourself in need of any assistance,

do send a Community Team Member or myself a friend request over discord

and PM them or myself at @mightbepan#9864. I’d be more than happy to help.

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