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Kis_

By Kis_

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: minecraft-mp.com
    Discord: Criiimzon#6712
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Ruins the experience
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Unfair, and still ruins the experience
    Status: Denied

The night was cold, Zalkar had been playing with his dog.. then came the unexpected, With a strike the door was shattered into pieces, At the blink of an eye..Zalkar had laied eyes upon hes father and mothers wastes.. And was watching a wild animals feast upon their corpse, As zalkar knew what mother nature has done to him, He never forgot about this moment and vowed to one day do the same by destroying all life, And hes story begins...

Character Name: Zalkar
Character Race: SNOW_ELF
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 80
Physical Description: Muscular, Sneaky
Roleplay Scenario:

Shove him knowing that he is none other then one of those cash grabbers.

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Your application has unfortunately been denied. though here are the changes that would need to be made: 

 

 

  • Your Character Biography is too short. Please write at least 10 Full sentences. 
  • Your Character Biography Lacks references to LOTC lore, This can include, City names, religions, etc. Please check the Wiki for a list of lotc lore.

 

  • Your Physical description needs more information. ‘Sneaky’ is not a physical trait.
  • Your Personality traits require at least 1 flaw. 
  • Your Role play Scenario must contain both an emote and speech.
  • Your Skin is not appropriate for a Snow elf. Please check the Skin archive for examples

 

After correcting the above things, you may reapply at any time. If you have any questions, please send me a message on Discord @October#0121, and I recommend you join the New Player Discord using the following invite: https://discord.gg/Zr4EpN

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