KiwiMochi

-Please correct your meta-gaming and power-gaming definitions and provide examples. 

-Please stick to one tense during your character's biography, either first or third.

-Please provide at least one piece of server lore within your character's biography, this could be where your character resides that already exists within our map of Atlas, or perhaps what faith she is.

-Please assure that your character description makes sense, as you mention eye twice. 

-Please assure that your skin fits our current theme of the server which is fantasy medieval. It does not make sense for your character to have green hair or dark hair as a high elf. They usually have quite light hair toning. 

You have twenty four hours to make the following changes, failure to do so will result in an automatic denial. 

If you need further assistance please feel free to message me on the forums, in-game (/msg Torkoal_Tom) or my discord Torky#3015

We also encourage new players to join our new player discord where our application team members and helpers can assist you in any questions you might have!

Discord: https://discord.gg/eySYjqw
 

The given twenty four hours as passed, feel free to re-apply with the given changes!