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kuna_bug

By kuna_bug

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Other
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: Go along with the flow of the roleplay, don't have the urge to have it a specific way. Personally I would make sure that I am the roleplay around realistic actions and events.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: It makes others feel upsets because other people take it upon themselves to change things or do things on their own account. With tension in the air its hard to have any reasonable roleplay.
    Status: Denied
Character Name: Evie
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Female
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Evie has long dark brown hair, face framing bangs that dont fully cover her forehead but accentuate her facial feautures. She is 5'5'', 130lbs.
Roleplay Scenario:

Your character has just arrived in a swampy, dim town. As they look around, their gaze is met with shacks and cabins. It smells of rotted wood and wet moss. They duck and step into a tattered tent, illuminated by a series of candles suspended in the air. At the back of the tent, an old hag raises her head, “What brings you to this dingy town? She begins, then pauses to study your face—”Ah, it’s you. I’ve been expecting you. Sit,” she gestures at a cushion, “Tell me your story."

 

As Evie approached the tent, a smell hit her nose that made her crinkle. Soon she was face to face with an old lady, her complexion gross and oily and her hair obviously unbrushed. She hesitated as she leaned away from the old lady "Its me? What do you mean its me?" she asked as she realized the old ladys change in tone "Who are you?.." she asked gently, her eyes warily watching as if the old lady would poof out a spell or something "why do you want to know my story, and what are you doing in this..." Evie looked around and the smelly dingy tent "..tent?" she asked.

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Changed Status to Under Review

 

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

 

 

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  Please provide us with your characters eye color.

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

 

You’ll be given 48 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is smol_bean ! If you don’t have discord, please message me on the forums!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly  is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

 Unfortunately, your 48 hour editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret, you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

 

- Your Physical Description needs a bit more detail!  Please provide us with your characters eye color.

- please mention a little more of your backstory, even if your character doesn't speak on it

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is  smol_bean ! If you have any questions I'm happy to help! If you don’t have discord please reach out to me on the forums. 

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here is the link! Discord

 

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

Lastly is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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