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Kwic17

By Kwic17

    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Kwic#3370
    In your own words, what is powergaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When something happens online and you message people when they are offline without knowing the situation.
    In your own words, what is metagaming, and why should it be avoided in roleplay?: When you use bugs or information about the player to get an unfair advantage.
    Status: Denied

Born and raised in a lumber family. Child hood went smoothly because of the helpfulness of my family and friends that got me through the good and bad times. Teenage years went good, gaining a lot of friends and working hard in the field. Starting my adult years is going strong. I'm starting out on my own looking for work, and hoping to find a job that suits me.

Character Name: Jason Smurf
Character Race: Human
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 23
Physical Description: full grown beard, bald for hair style, blue eyes, and short but muscular.
Roleplay Scenario:

*Looks at man frighten*”Hello There, I’m looking for work maybe you can help me find it”*The man nods*he speaks”I don’t think I can help you find work, maybe ask another to see if they can help you find work”I speak”ok will do”*walks away to find work*

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AnimeWolf0080

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

To many errors

  • Your Metagaming and Powergaming Definitions are on the right track, though they’re not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including examples so I can tell you fully understand!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming
  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least two! These can be existing settlements, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!
  1. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas
  2. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 
  3. https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 
  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 10 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?
  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks are a bit lacking. If you’re lost on what more to say, think of their fears, how they act around new people, etc.
  • Your Skin is not up to LotC standards. Please take a look at our Skin Archive for references and free skins that you may use if you’d like.
  1. https://sites.google.com/view/skinarchive/home 
  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short. It must be at least four sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue and one action. 
  • Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 
  1. https://app.grammarly.com/

 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

My discord is Anime_Wolf#0080! If you have any questions i’m happy to help!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help, you can join the LotC Discord and the New player hub!, here are the links! 

https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forums/topic/193743-new-player-hub/

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