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    Discord: L0um15#5597
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: Is taking information from a real world or non-roleplayed moments and putting them in use against my roleplayed moment. Im avoiding metagaming by separate infromations I got while playing on two diffrent personas.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Ignoring your own character disabilites and putting my own persona in the best light in every possible scenario. I can't use winner emotes while loosing dramatically in a battle against tree armed robbers.
    Status: Denied

- "Hello" 

 

[Grimgram nodded his head slightly towards a well dressed gentlemen]

 

- "Im seeking of new life to begin here in this..."

 

[Gringram stopps his speech for a while to look upon the place he is right now.]

 

~ In this short while he noticed a cat escaping from a dog, an old women selling vegetables, bunch of salesmans shouting over the others about products in their dilapidated stalls, a tavern where underneath their stairs lays a drunken man ~


- "probably sailor" he thought. 

 

~ The world he went to was different than his small village. He didn't knew anyone, he felt the desire for a better life. ~

 

- "New life you say young fellow huh?"

 

[A man interrupted his contemplation about the place.]

 

- "Everyone seeks here for a better life down h'ere mate"

 

[Gentleman pointed in direction of a market with a poetic hand gesture.]

 

- "I could help you with your journey to a better life. You seek for work probably cause you new in town aint ya?". 

 

[Grimgram noded his head.]

 

- "Lets make it clear - your first day is non profit, come here at the evening and you...".

 

- "IM LOOKING FOR MY BROTHER"

 

[Grimgram shouted to a man]

 

- "A same height man like me with slightly thinner hairs with beard covered in white cloak with belted belted around his chest" 

 

~ Gentleman looked a bit angry that a newbie guy shouts at him and he wanted to keep his cool. ~

 

- "Listen young fellow I don't know where your brother is and you will probably be lost in this city by yourself if your brother is still here not in the sewers. I give you a great opportunity to start a new life here"

 

[Grimgram was supprised by the sudden change of mans character]

 

- "What you say mate you in it or no"
 
[Man approached Gringram by a step]

 

- "Whats up with you Grimgram always gets in troubles thought you're not a comunicative person" 

 

[A well-known voice was heard by Grimgram]

 

~ It was his brother that came to the city week before him. ~ 

 

- "Come on dude we're late don't stand here and come with me".


Character Name: Grimgram
Character Race: Highlander
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 21
Physical Description: Average-sized well-fit blond male with green eyes. My weight is around 178 pounds. I wear a dark leather robe with a brown belt attached to my waist.
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Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!



 

 

  • Your Character Biography is missing some lore references! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Main_Page

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters

 

  • Your Physical Description is a bit lacking; I recommend adding some more detail! If you’re lost on what to add, height, eye color, hair color, hair length, etc. are all good. 

 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!






 

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

My discord is Joshua#2340!

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! WIKI

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord here :Discord

Also here is a link to the new player hub! : New Player Hub

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed below <3

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!


My discord is Joshua#2340! If you have any questions I’m happy to help!

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