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    • Rules: Yes
    Referral: Through a Friend
    Discord: Mari<3#2648
    How do you avoid powergaming in roleplay?: To know and make use of information that wasn't provided or given in character.
    How does metagaming disrupt fair roleplay?: Powerplay is a form of bad roleplay related to controlling others' characters and unrealistic actions.
    Status: Denied

" Greetings ! , I am Atreus! I am a simple boy just traveling til' my heart desires in search of a professional to train my combat skills. "

" Do you know of anyone who could help me with that? "

Character Name: Arteus Brand
Character Race: Dark Elf
Character Gender: Male
Character Age: 19
Physical Description: He has pale dark skin , with silver medium-short hair. He's a solid (5'6). He is skinny (119 lbs) with abs .
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Changed Status to Under Review

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

  • Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! This can be a nation, major event, war, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • Your Character Biography is a bit short. Please include at least 6 sentences. If you don’t know what to add, I recommend thinking more about your character’s backstory. Where are they from, what were their parents like, why are they how they are…?

  • Your Personality Traits/Quirks need to include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a fault in their personality. 

  • Your Characters Fear Response must be an addition to your characters personality, the fear of death is too natural.

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response is a bit short. Please add more to your response and make sure to include one piece of dialogue and one action. 

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one action. Please make sure to add one!

  • Your Roleplay Scenario Response should include at least one piece of dialogue surrounded by quotation marks. Please be sure to add one!

  • Be sure to write your Roleplay Scenario Response in the third person!

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

 

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [Luxcio#84321]  I’m often online too, so you can message me with  /message Luxcio to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here! : https://discord.gg/fwEQA2F

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

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