Lady_Spoon34

You will have 24 hours to make the following changes to your application. Please message me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] once you have made the changes, and I’ll take another look at your application
 

• I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions seem to be quite vague so, make sure to apply your knowledge more efficiently and try to add some examples that could be representing each.
• Your Character Biography seems to have a great story-line, however, It lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC Wiki. This could include, city names, religions, et cetera.
• Your Character Biography includes a single piece that is not allowed within your application- ‘ She impressed people with her Arcane magic of Telekinesis, though she grew anxious.’ If it was not clear, I must remind you that you are not allowed to have any Magical knowledge, abilities, or items in this application.
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions and concerns. 

Sorry! Be that as it may, your application has been denied because the 24 hour period has ended and because you didn’t follow the changes I had given once you were placed under pending. However, you are allowed to reapply immediately as long as you follow the required changes while doing so.

You can contact me with any questions or concerns through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] or here on my forums account.
 

• I’d recommend re-reading the definitions of both Meta-gaming and Power-gaming. Both of your definitions seem to be quite vague so, make sure to apply your knowledge more efficiently and try to add some examples that could be representing each.
• Your Character Biography seems to have a great story-line, however, It lacking with regards to relevant information from LotC- It does not seem to include the mandatory (1) lore piece from the LotC Wiki. This could include, city names, religions, et cetera.
• Your Character Biography includes a single piece that is not allowed within your application- ‘ She impressed people with her Arcane magic of Telekinesis, though she grew anxious.’ If it was not clear, I must remind you that you are not allowed to have any Magical knowledge, abilities, or items in this application.
  
  You can also join our New Player Discord If you haven’t already- Where you can ask questions to our Community Team and meet other server players. You can contact me here on the forums, or through my discord [TwistedFries#1055] for any questions or concerns.