Landon123311

Hi there! As you can see, your app is almost ready! Just a few changes you need to make, but don’t worry - you are doing great!

• Your Metagaming Definition is on the right track, though it’s not quite there. Take another look at our Wiki’s definitions for help, and I recommend including an example so I can tell you fully understand!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Metagaming_%26_Powergaming

• Your Character Biography is missing a lore reference! Please remember to include at least one! These can be major events, wars, religion, etc. Here are some links that may help you find some!

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Arcas

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Almaris

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Races 

  • https://wiki.lordofthecraft.net/index.php?title=Nations_and_Major_Charters 

• Your Character Biography is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

• Your Roleplay Definition and Experience must include whether or not you've roleplayed before!

• Your Personality Traits/Quirks must include at least one significant negative trait. This can be anything that is a significant fault in their personality.

• Your Character Goal is a bit lacking! Please try to make sure your character's goal connects with their biography!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is too short! It must be at least 4 sentences long and include at least one piece of dialogue in quotes and one action!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response is written in first person! Please make sure to write in third person while talking about your character!

• Your Roleplay Scenario Response must be written from only the perspective of your own character! Do not control the actions of the man who greets them, simply respond to their first words!

• Your Skin does not match your physical description. Please fix this accordingly!

• Please fix all grammar, spelling, and punctuation errors in your application to the best of your ability. I recommend using a free grammar checker such as Grammarly. 

  • https://app.grammarly.com/

You’ll be given 24 hours to correct the changes above. Once you are done correcting, please contact me!

Whenever you are done or have any questions, feel free to message me via the forums, or in-game with /message VictoriaMinaj! If I’m not around there, you can add me on discord at Vi#3544

If you still need help, make sure to check the wiki! 

Here’s the New Player hub!

If you need to contact me, or need help,  you can join the LotC Discord. 

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Hi there, as you can see your application has unfortunately been denied, check below for the detailed reasons why.

- Unfortunately, your 24hr editing period has expired.. However, don’t fret; you are free to reapply immediately, just remember to edit and change all that is listed above 

Don’t worry though! You can submit a new application and try again right after, just make sure you correct the things listed!

Need help? Feel free to contact me via the forums or my discord [ Vi#3544 ]. I’m often online too, so you can message me with /message VictoriaMinaj to find me in game. If I’m not around, you can also use the LotC Discord which is right here!

Also, I would recommend that you read over the wiki! WIKI

As well, here is the link to the New Player Hub forum post.